Sunday, August 3, 2008

Story Change

I found angels and demons a little cliche considering the many stories doll owners make up for their dolls. I'm going for something dramatic, but not blown out of proportion. Therefore, I'm making a story change. Here's the current summary:

This is the story of Sawada, Nozomi (沢田 のぞみ). He was born to a Japanese father and an Irish mother. His parents separated when he was very young, because his father was caught up in an affair with another woman. A few years passed, and Nozomi witnessed the most scarring event of his life. After coming home from elementary school one day, he was the first to find his mother hanging from the ceiling. Due to the trauma, Nozomi was sent to America to live with his maternal grandparents.

While he is content living with his grandparents, Nozomi vows to avenge his mother, whom he had been very attached to. He blames his mother's suicide on his father. When he learns that his father had two other children, Nozomi goes back to Japan as an American exchange student in order to find out who they are. He plans to ruin his father's life by using his half-siblings. While in Japan, he uses the name Thackery Riordan, the name his mother chose for him after she left his father.

During his stay there, he becomes best friends with a punky boy in his class. He also becomes close friends with his best friend's younger sister, and even begins to harbor some feelings for her. Together, the three of them are almost inseparable, as if they were real siblings...

What Thackery did not anticipate is that his friends are his half-siblings. He does not know yet, but when he finds out, will he be able to follow through with his original plans?

That's the basic gist at least. I don't think my blog entries will be about this story, it's just made to help me get grasp of their potential characters. Anyway, it's a little more believable than divine intervention and super mafias.

Sincerely,

Nobody ♥

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